My thoughts:
1) Require ICE to get a warrant to enter private property. Um, no.
1a) Require verification that a person is not a US citizen before holding them in immigration detention. Nope. Should be easy to prove you are a citizen if you are one.
2) No masks. Nope. ICE agents need protection from COVID too. COVID is the only reason they are wearing masks.
3) Require ID. This is fine. I actually agree with this. You don't need to stop what you are doing in order to show an ID, but you do need to show an ID if you claim to be ICE. But, ICE is already doing this anyways.
4) Prevent enforcement in sensitive locations - no ice enforcement in hospitals, courts or churches. Nope. Nothing wrong with ICE waiting outside a court room to nab illegals. I notice that Schumer is just fine with Don Lemon raiding a church, but not ICE. Interesting.
5) Stop racial profiling. This is stupid. I think that ICE should be able to use common sense.
6) Uphold Use of Force Standards. Agreed, because this is already in place.
7) Ensure State and Local Coordination and Oversight. Coordination, yes, oversight, no. This is federal law. You have made it very clear that local governments can't enforce federal law.
8) Build safeguards around detention. I agree. Illegal Aliens shouldn't be treated any worse than the Jan 6th protestors. If solitary confinement in sub-standard facilities with no charges filed, no bond provided, and no contact with the outside world is good enough for political prisoners of the Dem party that are citizens, it's good enough for illegal aliens.
9) Body camaras - you have to use body cameras to monitor ICE, but can't use body cameras as evidence to prosecute crime. Um, no.
10) No paramilitary police - bring them in line with civil enforcement. I'm OK with this. Most civil enforcement organizations have swat teams. Uniforms should be at least as normal as, for example, the Harris County Swat team.
Here is my counter-proposal:
1) Immediately deputize all state and all major city law enforcement departments so that they can enforce federal immigration law. Allow state and local government to detain illegal aliens the same way that federal LEOs can until their immigration court date.
2) Make it illegal for protestors that are breaking the law while protesting to wear masks. Wearing a mask during a protest while you break a law as minor as jaywalking is now an additional crime.
4) Protect sensitive areas. Make it illegal to fund any protestor or protest where significant illegal activities occur. If you pay a protestor to protest, and they trespass in a hospital, private business, or church, you are criminally liable. In exchange ICE agrees not to arrest illegals in courthouses, hospitals, churches, schools, etc, but they are free to wait outside. Add language to RICO laws around paid-for protests.
Seems fair.